TEACHING WRITING USING PICTURE STORIES AS TOOLS AT THE HIGH SCHOOL LEVEL: THE MOVEMENT FROM OTHER REGULATION TO SELF REGULATION

In answering the essay prompt Arturo (Doris’s student) had written the following in his first paragraph: Many people like to work with people, to have good communication. Meanwhile, they like to learn about other jobs or cultures in some conversation with them. Usually they like to work with people because they give helping them. On the other hand, earn a lot of money save them the problems. Most people like these jobs because usually they don’t have a hard job and are busy every time. (Emphasis added) Doris then responded to Arturo’s use of the term ‘hard job’ in the following way. Arturo’s use of the...