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1<br /> <br /> IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE<br /> LAYOUT<br /> The 35553 is a total of 21 sentences. At about 12 words per sentence this is 252 words.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> a 3-sentence Intro<br /> a 5-sentence para<br /> a 5-sentence para<br /> a 5-sentence para<br /> a 3-sentence conclusion<br /> <br /> Conclusions<br /> A good conclusion will<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> rephrase the question<br /> summarize the main ideas<br /> give your opinion, if you haven't given it already<br /> look to the future (say what will happen if the situation continues or changes)<br /> <br /> but will<br /> <br /> <br /> NEVER add new information<br /> <br /> Should we test products on animals?<br /> I agree that we need to make sure that animals who are used for testing new products<br /> have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is<br /> necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways.<br /> Should we beat children?<br /> In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However it<br /> should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we<br /> must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible.<br /> Is education important?<br /> In conclusion, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of<br /> education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated<br /> to the maximum of their ability.<br /> <br /> 2<br /> <br /> Who are the better parents - men or women?<br /> I think this is not an either/or question. Both men and women have strengths and skills<br /> that are important for children's psychological growth. We need to ensure that both<br /> parents play an important role in the family in order to give children a good start in life.<br /> Who learns quicker - adults or children?<br /> Finally, I feel that we cannot generalize about children or adults being better learners. It<br /> depends on the situation and the motivation of the person, and the level of enthusiasm<br /> he or she has for learning.<br /> Should dangerous sports be banned?<br /> In summary, our society would be healthier if more people took part in sports of all<br /> kinds. We should continue to try to prevent accidents and injuries. However, we should<br /> also ensure that sports are challenging, exciting, and, above all, fun.<br /> Through recent medical advances we now have the capacity to determine the characteristics of<br /> unborn babies, produce clones, transplant animal organs to humans, as well as prolong life.<br /> Such technology is unethical, interferes with the course of nature and should be prohibited. To<br /> what extent do you agree with this opinion?<br /> <br /> 1.In conclusion, recent medical advances offer us advantages such as prolonging our lives,<br /> improving the quality of our lives, and providing some infertile couples with the opportunity to<br /> experience parenthood. On the other hand, they pose dilemmas, including compromising our<br /> standard of living because of a dependent elderly population, potentially causing harmful mental<br /> and physical side effects, and undermining our ethical values. Therefore we have to think about<br /> them carefully or it will not be good.<br /> <br /> This example follows the suggested model of a concluding paragraph. The two summary<br /> statements succinctly paraphrase the main arguments. The paragraph makes a<br /> recommendation too, however, the benefits of this are not stated, so it is vague and<br /> unconvincing.<br /> <br /> 2. What is more, poor people often cannot afford to pay for these new medical<br /> advances.Consequently, they are only a benefit to a small, affluent part of the population, so we<br /> should prohibit them.<br /> <br /> 3<br /> <br /> This example does not follow the suggested model of a concluding paragraph. There is no<br /> statement referring to the main arguments or summary of them. In fact, it provides another<br /> argument, which the concluding paragraph should not contain. It does make a recommendation,<br /> however, this appears to be motivated by envy or jealousy, so it is not a very credible<br /> suggestion.<br /> <br /> 3.To conclude, new medical advances have many positive outcomes. However, we should<br /> analyse our objectives carefully in order to decide what is appropriate and what should be<br /> permitted. If we do not, the result might not be longer more fulfilling lives, but instead,extended<br /> less satisfying existence.<br /> <br /> This example follows the suggested model of a concluding paragraph. The summary statement<br /> is good; it refers back to the main arguments. The paragraph makes a recommendation too,<br /> which seems logical and acceptable.<br /> <br /> 4<br /> <br /> EDUCATION<br /> 1. As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role<br /> for teachers in the classroom.<br /> There have been immense advances in technology in most aspects of people's lives, especially<br /> in the field of education. Nowadays, an increasing number of students rely on computers to<br /> research for information and to produce a perfect paper for school purposes. Others have<br /> decided to leave the original way of learning to get knowledge through online schools. These<br /> changes in the learning process have brought a special concern regarding the possible<br /> decrease of importance of teachers in the classroom.<br /> Some people believe the role of teachers started to fade because computers have been helping<br /> some students to progress in their studies quicker than when compared with an original<br /> classroom. For example, in the same classroom, students have different intellectual capacities,<br /> thus some would be tied to a slow advance in their studies because of others‟ incapacity of<br /> understanding. In this way, pupils could progress in their acquisition of knowledge at their own<br /> pace using computers instead of learning from teachers.<br /> However, the presence of a teacher is essential for students because the human contact<br /> influences them in positive ways. Firstly, students realize that they are not dealing with a<br /> machine but with a human being who deserves attention and respect. They also learn the<br /> importance of studying in group and respect other students, which helps them to improve their<br /> social skills.<br /> Moreover, teachers are required in the learning process because they acknowledge some<br /> student's deficiencies and help them to solve their problems by repeating the same explanation,<br /> giving extra exercises or even suggesting a private tutor. Hence, students can have a bigger<br /> chance not to fail in a subject.<br /> In conclusion, the role for teachers in the learning process is still very important and it will<br /> continue to be in the future because no machine can replace the human interaction and its<br /> consequences.<br /> Sample 2 :<br /> <br /> Nobody can argue that the acquisition of knowledge is more fun and easier with<br /> computers. The mere activity of touching and exploring this device constitutes an<br /> enjoyable task for a kid. This, accompanied with the relaxing attitude and software<br /> interactivity, usually conduce to a better grasping of new knowledge. At a higher<br /> educational level; the availability of digital books, simulator and other academic<br /> materials, provide the student with an ever accessible source of information, that<br /> otherwise would not be at hand.<br /> <br /> 5<br /> <br />