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NHlTNG LOI THirdNG GAP TRONG CAC BAI T A P<br />
DJCH VIET CUA SINH VIEN KHOA TIENG P H A P<br />
TRirdNG DAI HQC NGO^I NGU*, BJ^I HQC DA NANG<br />
THE COMMON ERRORS IN TRANSLATION EXERCISES OF STUDENTS OF<br />
FRENCH DEPARTMENT OF THE UNIVERSITY OF FOREIGN LANGUAGE STUDIES<br />
- UNIVERSITY OF DANANG<br />
NGUYEN T H A I T R U N G<br />
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(ThS; D^i hpc Ngo^i ngfi-, D^i hpc Dd NAng)<br />
Abstract: This aiticle identifies and analyzes common enters m translation assignments studoits<br />
fiom Frendi Department of the University ofForei^ Language Studies, University of Danang based<br />
on the criteria for the use of vocabulary, syntax, semantics, {»Bgmatic, o(4iesion and coherence. Based<br />
on these statistics and analysis, the authw oSets some sug^stions to tfie learner, the teacher and course<br />
content translation materials in ordo' to help ruse the efTectivoiess of the teachin^eaming this skill.<br />
Key words: erroi^; translation; students; French; propositions.<br />
1. D$t v i n d l<br />
b6 theo cdc tieu dif trdn nhu trong bing d i ^ 1£<br />
Hi^n nay, cdc [dian mdn thudc bp mrai didi sau:<br />
nhu U thuylt didi, thyc hinh didi. djdi ndi, djch<br />
vilt diion mdt ti lp khd k ^ tnxig Idning diuong<br />
trinh dto t^o cua cdc ngdnh dupc giSng dfiy t^i<br />
Khoa ti^g P h ^ Trudng D ^ Hpc Ngo^i Ngd. D^<br />
hpc Dd Nfing ( DHDN). £>dy Id nhOng mdn hpc<br />
quan trpng, thu vj, dupc sinh vidn ua thfch nhung<br />
d6ng didi cQng Id nhQng m ^ hpc mang 1^ kb&u<br />
ft khd Idifin cho ngucri hpe till h i ^ qua vide k ^<br />
sddyngtd<br />
qud kiem tra d^nh gjd k h ^ tiiyc sy cao nhu<br />
cujdidp<br />
78<br />
mong mu6n cua ngudi d^y cung nhu ngudi hpc.<br />
Giinh vl till, vi$c xde djnh nhihig loi thudng g^p<br />
trong C&; bdi t ^ dieh cda sinh vien Khoa tieng<br />
Phip, Tmdng D ^ hpc Ngo^ ngd, DHDN de r^i tilr<br />
lioiki^<br />
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dd nh$n di^n nhdng Idid khdn co bdn mang thih hd<br />
mgdily;<br />
th6ng cda d6i tupng ndy trong vife hpc cdc hpc<br />
De thay rd cdc tfnh chit khdc idiau trong c ^<br />
I^ian djdi nhfim tim ra nhthig gjdi j d i ^ su jrii^m hinh thuc sai sdt cua anh v i ^ ta sS fdi&itichm^t<br />
khd dl gjup bp hpc tdt hon cdc mdn hpc ndy Id mpt so tiudng hpp tioi bilu cy till dupc [didn lo^ theo<br />
vi^c ldm mang tfnh c ^ tiii^ cin dupc diu tu cdc tieu chf dupc dua ra bdi Wilss (1982a: 227):<br />
n^dncuu.<br />
sddip^tit, ciiph^, ngitn^iSd, ngfitfyng lienm,<br />
2. Cdch thuc tiln bdnh<br />
mgeh lgc.<br />
Ngd lidu n ^ d n cdu Id 146 bdi kiem tra gida<br />
3. K ^ qud khdo sdt<br />
ki. cuoi ki cdc hpc j d i ^ Dfeh viit 1,2. 3 vd Th^<br />
3.LLSi<br />
iitv^i^<br />
hdnh dich cua sinh vidn cdc khod 2007, 2008<br />
3.1.1. Sitdgngtiesai<br />
Khoa tieng Phdp. Sau khi ti^ hdnh dpc vd Ipc ra<br />
Dudi ( ^ sdphan tich nhQng vf dy dl th^<br />
nhdng tmdng t^ip md didng tdi tiiiy c6 sai s6t vl dupc mdt vdi sai sot tnmg cddi sd dyng td md aidi<br />
djch tiiu^ dya tien cdc tidu chi dupc dia ra bdi \idn CBl [difun i^idL Vf dy:<br />
Wilss (1982a: 227): su dgng tit, cU phdp. ngfi<br />
Le petqie frtmQtBs s'e^ beaucoip battiipoir<br />
ngfOd, r^dgr^<br />
liin kit, mgeh lgc, chdng tdi dd icht^^<br />
d la dimtinaion des pays voisins: N ^<br />
tiling kd dui?c tong cpng c6 396 sai sdt Aipc phdn<br />
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ddn phip dd dau tranh lit nhilu dl tiiodt Ididi ^<br />
flnh hudng nhOng nude ldn c$a<br />
Troi^ vi dy ndy, ngudi (^chdadi^ti^sifdnA<br />
hudng dl dich tilr la domincOion R5 rdng day Id<br />
mdt sy sd dyngtilrsai; td /la domination Hibag h i<br />
cd ngh& ndo Id s(/ dnh hudng md chi cd n^iia Id<br />
sgthmig tri,sgddhdvk tiiyc sy Id nhdng i^ifo<br />
ndy mdi phd hpp vdi tiiyc tl ljch sd cda nude<br />
PMp.<br />
2.1.2. Stt t^g tit khdng filii hpp<br />
Qua [dldn tich. chung tdi nh$n thiy cd nhQng<br />
tnidng hpp ngudi djch sd i ^ g tit khdng din mdc<br />
dd sai nhung rd rdng Id chua i:hd hpp. Tahdy phdn<br />
tich nhQng tnidng hpp sau dl tiiiy rd hon dieu ndy.<br />
Vfdy:<br />
Tit ngfi vMptxa9uaj}AA7ng:Levocabulaiiea<br />
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65<br />
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cd tiii thdo l^ dugc, nguM djch (S ^ch Id esf a<br />
demonta^ (Id di thdo). day rS rdng Id mdt ciu tnic<br />
sai. D6i vdi cau ndy, ta cd tiw djch Id: Ce A u ^ / e ^<br />
campiktement dimoniable / Ce bif^t peut<br />
mmpletemera se demonter / On peut completemera<br />
iMmonter ce btiffet.<br />
3.2.2. Citph^ khdngpim hgp<br />
Cd nhQng tiudng hpp, cd [di^ cda bdn djdi<br />
khdng sai nhung cung Idimig dupc [did hpp llm.<br />
Vfdy:<br />
Jean nepouvcdt s 'empicher de t&iger ses veux<br />
vers la jolie fillejjris de la parte: Jean k h ^ till<br />
ndo ngfin ddi mfit cua anh ay lilc nhln vl phfa cd<br />
gdi d§ thuong gin cdnh cda.<br />
Trong vf dy ndy, ngudi djch dd djch ciu tide<br />
s'en^jicher de diriger ses yeux vers (ngdn minh<br />
hudng mdt vi phia) Id ngdn ddi mdt dia anh iy<br />
Trong vf dy ndy, ngudi d)ch dd diing danh tit le / i ^ n/un WpMi £ ^ khdng phdi Id mpt cddi djdi<br />
vocabidaire dl djch danh td tit ngfi trong vdn bdn sai, tiQ^ nhirai, tiled till tiiiy, cdphdp cua bdn djch<br />
glc. Danh td le vocabulaire trong tiing P h ^ cd hoi nidm r i vd ii$ng nl. £)e cd d u ^ mdt bdn djdi<br />
ngh& ]ktitvgT^, edn tixtitngtttiong vdn bdn g6c gpn gdi^ vd sdc tich hon, til cd till ^ch Id: Jean<br />
ndy mang ^ nghia Id ngdn h^ ^'nt$ichdkh&igdil khdng the ndo thdi ngdm nhim cd g&i xinh d?p<br />
dcoi tiiuin ULtievgng. Chfnh vl thl, nlu ngudi djch<br />
•tcda.<br />
sd dyng danh td/e moT lio$c/a poro/e dl d|ch td/i><br />
3.3. Lm ngfi nghid<br />
ngfiiti sd tmyen d^t dupc diy duhon ^ nghia md<br />
3.3.1. Ngfi n^ia sai<br />
tdc ^ cda vfin ban ^)c muc»i dien d^t<br />
Vf dy: Becatmip de bangttes sont iquvpies<br />
d'tm ^stributeur automatique de billets: Nhilu<br />
ZZ Lii ngit phdp<br />
ngdn hdng dd lidn kit 1^ v(M nhau thdnh h€th6ng<br />
2.2.1. Cdphq) sai<br />
Troi^ qud trhih phdn tfch ngd U^u, chdng tdi phan idi6i tfadtyd^fi<br />
nh$n tiii^ mdt ^ l u Id ngudi dfch dd khdng ft lin<br />
Trraig vf dy ndy, ngudi djdi dd hilu su nghia<br />
djch nguydn vfin ciu tide ngd p h ^ cua vfin bdn ciia nhiki td tnmg vfin bdn goc dSn d ^ mpt bdn<br />
goc m$c dd nhQng ciu true ndy ho$c Id khdng djch hodn todn sai vl m$t ngd nghia so vdi bdn<br />
dung ho$c Id khdng phu hpp vdi vfin phong cda ^ . Thd nhit, ciu tiijc itre iqtt^ de cd nghia Id<br />
ngdn ngd £ch. Vfdy:<br />
thigc trang bf chd khdi^ [di^ Id liin kit lgi vdi<br />
Cdi td dii nai> hodn U)dncd thi thdo rdp duoc: nhau, tiid hai. billets d ddy Id /t^n chd khdng phdi<br />
Id tiii. Tdm I^i, cdu ndy jdidi dupc djch Id: MUiu<br />
Cette armoire d ihiest totalement d dimontage<br />
tientgdpr^.<br />
Trong vf dy hdn, ngudi djch djch cym ti^coi Ai ngdnhdr^dugcb'angbim^rut<br />
dii ngy Id cetie armoire d tiii (cdi td di dgng trd<br />
2.3.2.<br />
Ngfingl^khdr^pHihgp<br />
fl^;. Ddy 1^ Id mdt cdch sd dyngtilrchua [did hpp<br />
Cd nhdng tiudng hpp, t ^ n ^ h J a cda bdn djdi<br />
bdi vi, tiong tieng Vipt tiii cdi fti cft^ khdng chi kh&ig hdn Id sai nhung cQng khdng phd hpn Ifim<br />
dttag dl dyng trd md cdn ddng dl n h i ^ v$t dyng vi Idi&ig tii$t trung tiidnh vdi bdn ngu6n ve m$t<br />
khdc; hon nda, tiong tiing Phdp cd mpt danh ti^ ngQ n g ^ D I tiiiy rd hon d^ng l5i ndy. Vf dy:<br />
tuong duong, dd Id oe 6 i # t V|ly tot hon Id chung<br />
SchadieladovctiondelavilleUiplusproche<br />
ta ndn ddng danh td CC dii^f dl djch cymti>cxh" fii sur la carte: Ddn mfit vdo bdn d6. anh ta dang tim<br />
c/i^ n ^ . Ngpdi sai sdt vl cdch sd dyng td tr&i ddy, hudng gin nhit vdotiidnh|di6.<br />
ta cdn thiy n g " ^ ^'^^ *^" P*^^ P ^ ™0t sai sdt<br />
Trong vf dy ndy. ngudi djch dd tiiyc h i ^ mdt<br />
khdc lidn quan d ^ cd phdp, dd Id, dl djdi ciu true ^matSctiiemtroT^ dfeh thugt bdng cddi them vdo<br />
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cymtijtDdn mdt vdo bdn d(5 de md td tu the cda thl coi day Id mdt iSi dung td sai, nhung n ^ i ^<br />
nhan v§t il trong vSn bdn goc. T19 nhidn, tiiao tdc tich Id till day ddng hon Id mpt l5i v l h ^ kit bdi<br />
tiiem cym td nay cd le Id khdng phd hpp \ i nd ldm loi nay bfit r^u6ntiirvipc ngudi djch khdng nh§n<br />
cho bdn djch khdng cdn trungtiidnhvdi ban g6c vl didn dui;n moi l i ^ k ^ ^Qa d^ td chi ^nh cdk-ci<br />
mfit ngd n^iia. Thdt v^y, ta khdng till tim tiiiy bit vd danhtiJrrhytkos^iiire trong cdu trudc. Ngoii<br />
cd mdt ylu to ndo trong vdn ban goc gidp ta bilt ra,tixmgbdn djch ndy. ngudi djdi cdn [dmm hai 1^<br />
dupc tu till cda nhan v ^ i^ Id nhu till ndo: cd ddn v l lidn kit khi sd dgng hai l i ^ td v ^ ^ dl dj(^<br />
mdt vdo bdn S hay ]k khdng? V§y t6t nhit Id U ^ ti^ (cory'onctkm) soit vd gj